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--- enoch [2021/11/08 16:54] – created sesser
+++ enoch [2021/11/12 04:57] (current) – admin
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 ====== Enoch ======
-A Noble [[elf|Elf]] who is a flatterer and old family friends to the player.
+A Noble [[elf|Elf]] who is a flatterer and an old family friend to the player.
 >// He is a flatterer, always complimenting the rich and powerful in the hopes of currying their favor. To those he considers “beneath him,” he offers nothing but scorn and abuse.// - Backstory Codex - (Patrician BS)
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-===== Backstory References =====
+===== Backstory Appearances =====
 ==== Patrician ====
-Enoch service a particularly illegal type of wine, a very dangerous and strong wine called Black wine to his guests.
+Enoch serves a particularly illegal, dangerous, and strong drink called Black Wine to his guests.
-  * Place Enoch under arrest which will surely tarnish your families name.
+  * Place Enoch under arrest which will surely tarnish your family's name.
   * Play along and enjoy the party.